Hazy and halting breaths,
Have never said so much before,
As when you came to leave me.
Standing at the door,
Almost saying- Don't go.
You said, "You're leaving?"
Words had lost their place,
In this space,
Like dead flowers,
That were kept but forgotten.
While the rotten-
Yellow stains on the pages
Will later say- I,
Was the one who walked away,
When you were the one,
Who never asked me to stay.
-Jason
cant say which one is better - amazing concept
ReplyDeletethat's the fun part. you don't have to :) we're glad you liked it!
ReplyDeleteI love Yellow :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you do :)
ReplyDeletesorry, couldnt help myself:
ReplyDeletemy eyes open
to the sunbeam on your back
your sleeping face shines
and i think of the night before...
dull blue secrecy
song
sound to muffle sound
...
but morning sanctifies us
draped in this new sheen
u smile in ur sleep
i do too...
p.s. loved your poems!
Both of those are SO relatable!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this blog :)
Hey Kanika,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment and the support. Love right back at ya ;)
Dear Anonymous,
Thanks for stopping by and sharing :)
P.S: I have psychic powers, I may know who you are :P
Kanika,
ReplyDeleteSo glad you love it :) you write gorgeously yourself!
Do come back,we plan on doing new things week after week.
Congratulations Anonymous,
you are now eligible for a top secret prize! Reveal your name (I wonder who you are...hmmm...)and Jason will reward you. Won't you,now,Jason?
Yup, I'm sure we can arrange something, depending on what Anonymous wants. I'm open to anything ;)
ReplyDeletegosh i love the way you guys write.... and i love the topic too... :)
ReplyDeletei miss being there so much... jason read my new note on fb. u are not tagged. but u can see it <3
@ Jason- loved it.
ReplyDelete@ Nikita- poem-wise brilliant, otherwise open up..
@Anonymous- kitna secret hai yaar tu! guess hi nahi kar paya koi bhi! heehee!
@Jason: It's beautiful.
ReplyDelete@Nik: Awwww :-)