when tired rules
are put to rest
and Pain and Trouble
come grudgingly to bed
finer things will rise
and come to life
behind closed eyes.
day after day,
I wait for that time.
Yes, there is always a reason. Unfortunately with this post, I have followed an isolationist policy and it is directed at a specific person. So to them, it would make sense... if they get it. But yes, over all as a piece, it could have been much more. Thank you for your feedback! Keep it coming :) <3
Sadly my pains come to me at night,
ReplyDeleteIn sleep i dream and fail to fight,
the dawn breaks and shines some light,
But alas!!it ends in another night..
Come on, be nice. Tell us your name :)
DeleteThank you for your comment though. We're glad you took a shot at this :P
Why so shy? Do tell us your name.
ReplyDeleteEven Cinderella left behind a whole glass slipper :)
"Even Cinderalla left behind a whole glass slipper." So cute :)
DeleteWhen each of my gods
ReplyDeletefall
in their own nakedness
with their own demons...
Do I know you :)
Deleteyou always know... you are the hermit
DeleteTo some I am the fool.
DeleteOr the devil.
Or the world :)
@ Nikita: This one goes to you!
ReplyDelete"finer things will rise
and come to life
behind closed eyes."
Beauty expressed through words.You convey a million things in those three lines!loved it!
@Jason:I found it to be a lil incomplete as if some more could have been there:)
Anonymous poets! YOU ARE KILLING US. This is like putting out a great murder story and not telling us who the culprit is. Do help us with your names.
ReplyDelete:)whats in a name?
DeleteGive us a picture then :P
Delete@Ankita, you picked out my favourite lines! Glad you liked.
ReplyDeleteAnd that's an interesting point you made...
@Jase: there must have been a reason for the choice?
Yes, there is always a reason.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately with this post, I have followed an isolationist policy and it is directed at a specific person. So to them, it would make sense... if they get it.
But yes, over all as a piece, it could have been much more.
Thank you for your feedback! Keep it coming :) <3
I actually liked Jason's. I'm all for incomplete :). sorry i didn't read this before.
ReplyDelete@nikita 'finer things will rise...' i love the way you write, i can almost hear you say it :)