Friday, March 9, 2012

Broken












i said
       -- catch--
before realizing
i was playing with myself.










 -Jason






by night
I walk on clouds
made of words;
your words
spoken over and over
on my chin
my feet
my tongue
my teeth.
By day
I see fluff;
the stuff
my dreams were made of
is on the floor.

-Nikita













7 comments:

  1. apple cinnamon teaMarch 10, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    @jason-economic/ layered, thought- out/pat.
    @nikita-flawless, almost magical inversion.
    Keep it going guys

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  2. You guys!
    Jason:wise!
    Niks: so real! So close!
    Thanks x
    Please keep writing guys xx
    *hugs*

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  3. one of your best :) loved it!

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  4. Hey guys...Love ur work..follow it regularly..would like ull to write somethng on 'Audacity'..m sure ull can do wonders with this one too.......Prakriti (Ankita Bakhda's Friend ) :)

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  5. superb!!when u guys convey so much in such few words,it seems lik a futile attempt to try and appreciate it!in short:keep ur thoughts flowing,wil always luk fwd to wordkashots!

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  6. Thank you so much Prakriti. We've decided to go ahead with Audacity as our next shot. Thanks for the suggestion :)

    Ankita, you are simply awesome. Thanks for all the love and support, as always :)

    Guys, you keep us going :) thank you so much!

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  7. @Rakhee, thank you :) Tell me what you mean by the inversion though... I am curious.

    @Shruti, glad you liked it. Hilariously enough, you were a witness to the event that inspired this one :p

    @ D'cruz, so were you :D Love :*

    @Ankita, please keep reading. Your comment really made us happy.

    and finally, @Prakriti :) We cannot tell you just how kicked we were with your comment:
    see what we've done with your idea here
    http://www.wordkashots.blogspot.in/2012/03/audacity.html

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