April being the cruelest month and all, we got our old pal Rakhee Panth in as Guest Writer to shake things up. She has a refreshing style, different from both your faithful writers.
I could go on and on. But I'll let the Shots do the talking.
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Sapphire sky
(New moon hung low)
A fear
it will be restless red again.
Whoever said
The journey of a thousand miles
Begins,
with a single step
-Rakhee
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we walk together
lock, stock, baggage
and all.
they smirk,
and wonder
how far we'll go.
the end
of the world.
and a little more.
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Ahh Love the way u r relating it !! Nice work, keep postin !!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dipankar. Anything you liked in particular? Any comments/feedback?
DeleteI loved both of them!
ReplyDeleteBtw, did you realise, your theme was quite similar... as per my reading :)
Hmmm...you're right. But try reading Rakhee's piece as the beginning of an individual's journey (thats how I had interpreted it at first) - I love this about poetry. And all art. No two people's interpretation needs to be the same.
DeleteI have to thank you for reading so thoroughly though. I enjoy your feedback. And all of your undercover work :p
And after this excessively formal comment, I will diffuse the tension by saying - Yayie wuvle :)