the next time
you try
to touch me
in the dark
i will slit your throat
over a full moon
putting a big red signal
in the sky
for people like you
who just don't get the point.
- Jason |
I watch
time go by in the patterns she leaves on your thigh. Some nights she breaks you In slivers. Some nights in half Or full. And some nights
I
am the sky.
My moon obscure,
and my clouds
awry.
- Nikita
|
Jason, those are very powerful words. I love that you used the given theme so unexpectedly to write something with such a strong message. I love the image it creates because sometimes, that is exactly what I want to do!
ReplyDeleteNik, I love love love the first half of your peom. But I don't know if I took it the right way, because you completely lost me in the second half. I've tried reading it over and over, but I don't get it :-(
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