Sunday, July 10, 2011

Salt










They will tell you
harmless
insignificant

details
Then wonder why you flinch.


They don't know about the open wounds;
There is so much they don't know.

-Jason






A little more
Or a little less
Will always catch you off guard.

If it was just right
you wouldn't even notice.




-Nikita















7 comments:

  1. 'They will tell you
    harmless
    insignificant
    details
    Then wonder why you flinch.'
    Feels like a case of deja-vu!

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  2. @ Nik- hits the right nerve..
    @Jason- ...its correct n nice..

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  3. I love the way You have got out the essence of this Most essential ingredient.Love the way you guys do it :)

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  4. nik- wonderful in its simplicity. not more not less. perfect

    jason- so much said without saying. just like u :)

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  5. Thank you all for your comments. They keep us going!
    Cheers :)

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  6. Jahnavi, Puja, Dcruz, Manasi, Thank you for your feedback. We do love it :)

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  7. @Nik: So true! It's perfect.
    @Jason: *wince* again, perfect.
    I love how both of you have written such different things, still stayed true to the theme flawlessly.

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