It could be so many things... what does it mean to you?
Here's our blue.
red blood
in my blue veins
is love
flushed into drains
no use
to this refuse
without
you.
- Jason
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like an infant
I like
to curl
up in the curves
of
letters
in the
crooks of words
forged
in ink.
the
blue is warm
and
fluffy,
and
softly sings me to sleep.
- Nikita
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Love it!! Too bad I've written mine long ago on this one :) but yes, veins and ink.... beautiful imagery. blue is so much around us that we ignore. Probably the most powerful color I know :D
ReplyDeleteAgree with D'cruz on the imagery, especially yours Jason. And Nik, I want to hug you for that beautifully soft picture you've created with words.
ReplyDeleteHe closed his eyes
ReplyDeleteAnd let the liquid quench...
Welcoming the fire,
Feeling it singe and scald
The burning came as a relief
As the poison claimed his heart
Finally...
Something she could never do...
Nik i love the positivity in your curls and Jason I am an ardent older fan of your writing so keep creating magic with intensity that is your strength.....
ReplyDelete:D hahaha!! you put it up!!
ReplyDeleteYou both should try 'heartbreak'. It might not be one word, but I would love to hear what you two have to say about it.
ReplyDeleteHave both of you tried 'hope'? If not, do try it please.
ReplyDeleteHello anonymous people :) It would be so much nicer if you could sign off your comments with your names, so that we know who we are talking to.
ReplyDeleteAs for Heartbreak, some would say that's a recurring theme on the blog :)
And Anonymous No. 2, Leave us your name, and we'll make it a dedication :)
Anonymous 2: Please do make a dedication and make it to 'Anonymous No. 2'. The name has a ring to it. :-)
ReplyDeleteHey, I have read your shots and nothing is completely based on the pain, the fears and the haunting of heartbreak.
ReplyDeleteI am looking to read what two quite unique writers have to say about something as common and still unique to each person, as heartbreak. Besides, I really need someone to share what they feel when the One person in their lives isn't there with them anymore. Feel free to not accept the suggestion.
We can try both; hope and heartbreak, on the condition that you tell us who you are. Keep your end of the bargain and we sure will have a shot up soon :)
ReplyDeleteCheers.
Hi, this is Nivedita i.e. Anonymous 2. I was hoping to be a secret admirer, but you rained on my mystery. Give me some Hope in return. :-)
ReplyDeleteNivedita is such a sexy name! We're glad we dragged you out of the mystery. And as promised, 'hope' will be up soon :)
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