they were worried
when her levels dropped
they had hopedwhen they named her she would run on forever but their dreams would soon dry up
she couldn't
live up to her name- Always. - Jason |
like a souvenir
of the most lovely thing she was ever given, she carries the frowning scar of a c section under her belly without a care. customers will only see what lies beneath. - Nikita |
Wow! this is the first time that I might require an interpretation of both your poems, for fear of interpreting it wrong.. Writing style amazing, but could you both please tell me in one line..?
ReplyDeleteYou guys should really write more than once-in-a-month entries. I bet there'a lot of stuff you write that goes unseen. Care to share, pretty please?
ReplyDeleteAnd amazing pieces, as usual :)
@ Nikita: Could have possibly never thought of it in this way!!Brilliant!:)
ReplyDelete@Jason: I liked the theme but somewhere in the middle I guessed where it is heading to!
Guys kiss....keep it simple and short (which it is)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines... like always
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